Sailors Beware

foghorn's soulful moan
dense cover hides shallows' graves
mariners be warned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Yup. That foghorn is aptly named! Nice senryu, Peter!
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 6:00 PM
super senryu Peter:-) hugs Jan xx
Iversen  Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Many thanks Jan, i appreciate the comment
Gauthier Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Fabulous poem, Peter.
Iversen  Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Thank you. I must admit that I've changed the second line from... deep graveyard to ...shallows graves.
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