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Sailors Beware

foghorn's soulful moan dense cover hides shallows' graves mariners be warned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/26/2019 2:39:00 PM
Yup. That foghorn is aptly named! Nice senryu, Peter!
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Date: 12/23/2019 6:00:00 PM
super senryu Peter:-) hugs Jan xx
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Peter W Iversen
Date: 12/23/2019 7:32:00 PM
Many thanks Jan, i appreciate the comment
Date: 12/23/2019 4:19:00 PM
Fabulous poem, Peter.
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Peter W Iversen
Date: 12/23/2019 7:35:00 PM
Thank you. I must admit that I've changed the second line from... deep graveyard to ...shallows graves.

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