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Sailing On

Sailing on the azure ocean, I ponder emotions. Allowing love and joy to reign, Then peace I shall obtain. The storms of life will come, Beating like a loud drum; But one must not succumb. A new dawn, Sailing on. 09/18/201

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Date: 9/20/2021 1:13:00 PM
Such beautiful and calming words Alexis, to sail on brings the thought of being in the calming sea sailing on a boat. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 9/19/2021 5:20:00 AM
WOW! So beautiful--elegantly delivered message.
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Date: 9/19/2021 3:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry, Alexis. I have not looked at the contest so I can't comment either but I enjoyed reading the lines. Those storms of life sometimes bring some deep dark waters. Your presence at my page is so supportive. Sara
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Date: 9/19/2021 2:33:00 AM
Love this Alexis, every word… Belle
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Date: 9/19/2021 2:29:00 AM
I cannot judge if it is a quietus but it's a beautiful poem. Hugs
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:37:00 AM
This is another beauty of yours, Alexis:) soupmail...
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Date: 9/19/2021 12:02:00 AM
Allowing love and joy into our lives leads to a happy and peaceful existence. Enjoy your Sunday Alexis. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2021 4:23:00 PM
What a lovely and relaxing piece this is. Wonderful imagery. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/18/2021 4:20:00 PM
You united your heart to love and that is a commendable way of living life, I adored your poem Alexis, it calmed me, and gave me hope. xo
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Date: 9/18/2021 3:43:00 PM
Hello Aliex y., from above looking at the clouds you can see many things in clouds. Hugs.
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Date: 9/18/2021 3:18:00 PM
This poem is so optimistic and beautiful, Alexis! It is in my faves. :D
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