Alexis Y. Poet Rhyme

Sailing On

Sailing on the azure ocean,
                                        I ponder emotions.
                                  Allowing love and joy to reign,
                                    Then peace I shall obtain.

                                   The storms of life will come, 
                                     Beating like a loud drum;
                                    But one must not succumb.

                                              A new dawn,
                                               Sailing on.  

 






09/18/201

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Gordon Mcconnell September 20, 2021 at 1:13 PM Such beautiful and calming words Alexis, to sail on brings the thought of being in the calming sea sailing on a boat. Take care, Gordon

Vijay Pandit September 19, 2021 at 5:20 AM WOW! So beautiful--elegantly delivered message.

Sara Kendrick September 19, 2021 at 3:14 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry, Alexis. I have not looked at the contest so I can't comment either but I enjoyed reading the lines. Those storms of life sometimes bring some deep dark waters. Your presence at my page is so supportive. Sara

Beryl Edmonds September 19, 2021 at 2:33 AM Love this Alexis, every word… Belle

Victor Buhagiar September 19, 2021 at 2:29 AM I cannot judge if it is a quietus but it's a beautiful poem. Hugs

Joanna Daniel September 19, 2021 at 1:37 AM This is another beauty of yours, Alexis:) soupmail...

Tom Cunningham September 19, 2021 at 12:02 AM Allowing love and joy into our lives leads to a happy and peaceful existence. Enjoy your Sunday Alexis. Tom

Judy Ball September 18, 2021 at 4:23 PM What a lovely and relaxing piece this is. Wonderful imagery. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB

Mystic Rose Rose September 18, 2021 at 4:20 PM You united your heart to love and that is a commendable way of living life, I adored your poem Alexis, it calmed me, and gave me hope. xo

Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2021 at 3:43 PM Hello Aliex y., from above looking at the clouds you can see many things in clouds. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 18, 2021 at 3:18 PM This poem is so optimistic and beautiful, Alexis! It is in my faves. :D