Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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(inspired by ROTK,from my LOTR poetry collection, Frodo sadly saying good-bye, to Sam)
 

 

Sailing Away

Don't you worry about me,Sam, 
With them,I'll be as happy as I can be. 
We'll make it far away to the sea, 
Sailing from here to there,you'll see. 

This long road must I take now, 
Awaiting us is the Elven's white ship. 
Somehow I'm certain that we'll get there, 
To the "Undyng Lands", we'll happily go. 

So many things I need to know, 
Things, to make my heart again aglow. 
It's been so long ago for me, 
Since clear layers of rainbows, I've seen. 

Today I join this journey very sad, 
Hoping, that one day you'll join me too. 
Without you, I'll sailing soon the sea, 
But one day,we'll be together you and me. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka laydp2000 
copyright@2005 


October,16,2014

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Charmaine Chircop October 20, 2014 at 10:37 AM Hello tnks for findimg my poetryand for leaving a comment on mine in this big bowl of soup..and I am glad I read this beautiful poem which transmits the sad feeling of goodbyes and the hoping of meeting again which gives it a blend of emotions,and a positive ending.Awesome!

The Situation October 18, 2014 at 2:43 PM I felt this poem Dorian. I remember the scene and this poem brought out the meaning of friendship between sam and Frodo. very heart felt.

Alesia Leach October 17, 2014 at 2:04 PM Friends is something we can't live without. Very well written.

Paul Schneiter October 16, 2014 at 9:41 PM Dear Dorian, There is a sweetness and an affecting sadness in this poem that I find touching and moving. Congratulations on an excellent composition (wish I had written it).