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Sailing Away

On the clear water,
A boat is floating away;
Its' sails wave goodbye.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 27, 2009 at 2:38 PM

Dear Chris, Welcome to the SOUP I can tell YOU know Raul(Whom I admire and respect) Are YOU a Photographer also? I see YOU are also a Haiku Expert ALWAYS...HG

Brian Strand

March 25, 2009 at 9:47 AM

Great visual Chris.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:35 AM

Loved the last line...............Danielle

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2009 at 8:44 PM

What a lovely haiku, Chris! The imagery of sails waving goodbye is amazing. Carolyn

February 5, 2009 at 12:39 PM

Nice use of personification. Sounds like a peaceful place to be. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Jen H.

February 5, 2009 at 6:43 AM

Word selection is great, it paints a beautiful picture, with great personification in the last line. Welcome to the soup! ~Jen~

Michael Degenhardt

February 5, 2009 at 5:17 AM

Again the form is perfect and your words are selected well and placed for a perfect flow. The imagery is nice and clear making for a very good write. Michael