Sailing

Life is so serene
Sailing along the ocean....
Stranded with no tow

Wave floods over bow
three tiered cake melts in the noon
June sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 2:52 PM
like these Doris, especially the first one... awesome...
Lwele Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:39 AM
I also enjoy your grandeur work.
Komala Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:44 PM
awesome write Doris...enjoyed :) luv SK
A   Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:22 PM
Doris, always loving your poems...xox~pd
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:16 PM
oh, is this for that one contest where the weather goes from bad to good or vice versa? I think this one really works well going from good to bad!!
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