Sailing

Sailing

Smoking seagul wind
deep blue sea horizon breeze
great white shadow eyes


 June/17/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 11, 2013 at 1:44 AM
I got sunshine
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Very nice imagery!
Austin Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 9:50 AM
Sensitive and beautiful stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver
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December 2, 2012 at 7:51 PM
D.G... ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA
Mehta Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Lovely haiku with great images penned so well, Diminix
A   Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 4:48 PM
poetry assignment# Form: (30 lines+) free verse Catagory: love, devotion, nature, and art~~~ Title: "Dangerous ceramic doll"
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June 17, 2011 at 4:37 PM
i am with carolyn,,, and thanks for the comment... also...i will send assignment shortly,..p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 4:00 PM
As a boater I can really appreciate the image you have painted in your lovely haiku, Dominix. Are the "great white shadow eyes" referring to clouds passing by? Thanks for your comment. Best wishes, Carolyn
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