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Sailing Smoking seagul wind deep blue sea horizon breeze great white shadow eyes June/17/2011

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 1:44:00 AM

I got sunshine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 10:22:00 PM

Very nice imagery!

Daver Austin

Date: 12/3/2012 9:50:00 AM

Sensitive and beautiful stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2012 7:51:00 PM

D.G... ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/17/2011 6:19:00 PM

Lovely haiku with great images penned so well, Diminix

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2011 4:48:00 PM

poetry assignment# Form: (30 lines+) free verse Catagory: love, devotion, nature, and art~~~ Title: "Dangerous ceramic doll"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2011 4:37:00 PM

i am with carolyn,,, and thanks for the comment... also...i will send assignment shortly,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2011 4:00:00 PM

As a boater I can really appreciate the image you have painted in your lovely haiku, Dominix. Are the "great white shadow eyes" referring to clouds passing by? Thanks for your comment. Best wishes, Carolyn