Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Sailing

thoughts sail on blue waves
                                       of deep heart looking for the
                                          support of lighthouse

                                         sailing ship strikes sand 
                                   stays secured from the windward.
                                         a new snag to solve

                                           worries come in way
                                   whacking waves, winds, williwaws
                                          win them with warm smiles

                                                 (Haiku)

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Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2020 at 2:59 PM love the alliteration, especially the last one with the w's. Patri Venkata Ramana August 2, 2020 at 11:14 PM So glad to receive your compliments. Thanks a lot!

Janice Canerdy July 16, 2020 at 7:44 AM Very creative and inspirational, Patri. Janice Patri Venkata Ramana July 17, 2020 at 12:09 AM very glad to receive your compliments. Thank you for the support.