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6/21/2025 for VISIONS OF A VIGNETTE 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

sailboat, dear conveyance of my dimmed dreams, glide freely 'neith the sun I'll watch as you sail away with my heart

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Date: 6/26/2025 5:26:00 PM
ouch but well portrayed , david...huge congrats on your win in my contest!
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David Crandall
Date: 6/26/2025 5:33:00 PM
Thanks, Nette, I enjoy these short poem contests!
Date: 6/25/2025 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Kind of sad with her sailing away with your heart. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 6/26/2025 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 6/22/2025 8:04:00 PM
You broke my heart with that last line, David. Powerful penning.
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David Crandall
Date: 6/23/2025 9:55:00 PM
Glad it had an effect Gershon!
Date: 6/21/2025 8:43:00 PM
Lovely image. I hope you win.
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David Crandall
Date: 6/23/2025 9:54:00 PM
Glad you liked it Hilda!
Date: 6/21/2025 4:51:00 PM
perfect contest entry! Your words tugged on my heart! best wishes with the contest, yellow rose
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David Crandall
Date: 6/23/2025 9:54:00 PM
Thanks, Yellow Rose - glad you liked it!

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