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6/21/2025 for VISIONS OF A VIGNETTE 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Sailboat

sailboat, dear conveyance of my dimmed dreams, glide freely 'neith the sun I'll watch as you sail away with my heart
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Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 5:26 PM
ouch but well portrayed , david...huge congrats on your win in my contest!
Crandall Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 5:33 PM
Thanks, Nette, I enjoy these short poem contests!
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Kind of sad with her sailing away with your heart. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Thanks Sara!
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 8:04 PM
You broke my heart with that last line, David. Powerful penning.
Crandall Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Glad it had an effect Gershon!
Greenhough Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Lovely image. I hope you win.
Crandall Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 9:54 PM
Glad you liked it Hilda!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 4:51 PM
perfect contest entry! Your words tugged on my heart! best wishes with the contest, yellow rose
Crandall Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 9:54 PM
Thanks, Yellow Rose - glad you liked it!
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