Sailboat

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Visions of a Vignette 2

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Date 6/21/25

Sailboat sails set starboard sheets taut west winds ten knots wheel steady in my hand not a cloud in the blue sky fresh salt air

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/21/2025 9:14:00 PM

Can I jump aboard, or am I too late? ~ Water, Water Everywhere... ~ Gershon

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 9:28:00 PM

absolutely. Thers is always room for one more.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/21/2025 10:01:00 AM

What a creative/fun "Sailboat" write you have here. Love It... I wish I was in your boat out on the water. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a fun day writing away..........

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 12:38:00 PM

Thanks Paula. It would be fun

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2025 8:47:00 AM

Wow. This looks great. I need to check this contest out.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 12:37:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/21/2025 6:49:00 AM

Lovely! I could ride the peaceful day!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 12:37:00 PM

Thanks Kim.