Sail Away With Me

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This lyric was inspired by the song "Sailing" by Christopher Cross.

Please join me in this fantasy
and sail away to paradise;
as trade winds blow, our sails are full
so just give in as dreams entice.

For Neverland’s within our reach,
the innocence of love awaits;
it’s calling us to sail away
and enter through her luring gates.

       Tranquility has open arms
       as Eden beckons with her charms.

It’s only but a dream away
this tropic reverie of mine;
please join me on this magic ride
the time is now, our stars align.

We’ll stroll the pure white sands by day
and dream beneath the stars at night
as palm trees sway with ocean breeze;
a fantasy of pure delight.

       Serenity is what we long
       as paradise resounds her song.

      My fantasy has open arms
      as Eden beckons with her charms.


August 8, 2025

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Date: 8/24/2025 12:32:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your lovely lyric inspired by Christopher Cross's "Sailing". The song is a favorite of mine so it was a delight for me to read your tribute. :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2025 11:38:00 AM
A favorite of mine as well. :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/24/2025 2:24:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Riley, I’m glad the read delighted you. And I like your taste in music. John
Date: 8/19/2025 3:48:00 PM
Just beautiful, John, and so is Cross' voice that always draws me. I love each verse, so romantic, and the imagery demands one say yes, I'll go, right now! Your pen has romance free dancing in paradise. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/20/2025 3:02:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, CayCay, I appreciate it. Dallas is home but I do dream about being in a tropical paradise, sharing time with the one I love. Hugs, John
Date: 8/13/2025 12:29:00 PM
I can see how this song inspired you, my dear friend. I wanted to come back and read this again, and let you know, there's beauty in poetry. Feeling the emotions that are deeply tucked within. Music has inspired me many times. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/14/2025 2:13:00 AM
Thank for stopping back by, Brandy, I always appreciate your thoughts and encouragement. Hugs, John
Date: 8/9/2025 12:53:00 AM
This poem feels like a warm, gentle invitation to escape and relax. The peaceful imagery and smooth rhythm make it a soothing, dreamy read.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/9/2025 4:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Rowena, I’m glad you found my lyric soothing and dreamy. Have a great weekend. Hugs, John
Date: 8/8/2025 5:38:00 PM
' Please join me in this fantasy and sail away to paradise, we’ll stroll the pure white sands by day and dream beneath the stars at night. ' Such a beautiful invitation, filled with romance and love. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This reminds me of song, and with that being said, I wish to place this in my favorites. This is magical in every way, my dear sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/9/2025 4:23:00 AM
Ah yes my dear friend, let my poetry take you away. I’m glad my thoughts touch you as they do. Perhaps the song you are thinking of is Sailing by Christopher Cross, it is what inspired this piece. Hugs, John
Date: 8/8/2025 4:29:00 PM
an outstanding lyric, John. So much to like about this poem. I especially liked: It’s only but a dream away this tropic reverie of mine; please join me on this magic ride the time is now, our stars align. I felt 'magic' in this lyric. Well done. wishing you a pleasant evening & thanks for visiting my page, Sara
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/9/2025 4:17:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, Sara, I’m glad you liked this lyric of mine. Have a great weekend. John
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