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Said the Moon To the Sun

Said the moon to the sun I was the first across the sky to run Said the sun to the moon True, but you can have your dark evenings and nights For I've got bright mornings and blazing high-noons ~ sun showers, rainbows and picturesquely-painted late afternoons

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Date: 12/24/2019 8:47:00 PM
Gershon, Looking forward to the new year and more of your wit and candor my friend. Watching the majesty of the midnight mass in Rome, as a wayward soul always in the search. Peace to the world the message. -Richard
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/24/2019 9:25:00 PM
Completely appreciated and understood, my friend… If you have a minute, try 'Holiness on Christmas Eve,' which I just posted. Thank you so, so much. G-d bless, Gershon
Date: 12/17/2019 10:29:00 AM
A fantastic write, my friend.. Enjoyed the duality.. The sun and moon are so opposite... However they both are so unique!! I enjoy the sun.. I also enjoy the moonlight.. If we didn't have duality, then we wouldn't savor just one experience.. To savor is to experience the opposite..I really enjoy both experiences the sun and moon have to offer us..Love the two differences! Your write had inspired and allowed me to feel grateful for duality in this world.. Bravo!! Have a blessed day, Gershon..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/17/2019 11:52:00 AM
Wow, what a sensational comment, Robertina! Thank you for helping me savor the duality too! Always a pleasure to hear from you! Season's best, Gershon
Date: 11/25/2019 12:43:00 AM
The sun wins, for sure!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2019 1:31:00 PM
The sun has won; the moon is done. :) gw
Date: 11/24/2019 2:28:00 PM
Great concept Gershon. Love the dual!! Excellently penned as always..Best...Ron
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 3:19:00 PM
Dueling orbs, I guess. Thanks for the interesting angle on this one, Ron. Best always, Gershon
Date: 11/24/2019 10:40:00 AM
I was once a night person, but now I so embrace the day. God comes in the morning, yet he is with me all night...watching over things... it is lovely... Your pen is sharp indeed. Ann
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:06:00 PM
The day will have its say! Thanks, Ann ~ Gershon
Date: 11/24/2019 9:15:00 AM
I nice personification of the sun and moon, Gershon, Nicely penned. John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:05:00 PM
Appreciate your kind words, John. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/24/2019 8:02:00 AM
Totally delightful, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:05:00 PM
And thank you, Line, for a delightful comment! :) gw
Date: 11/24/2019 6:58:00 AM
Enjoyed! Nights can be lovely but those warm and picturesque sun-filled days! We had a very picturesque day yesterday!
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Date: 11/24/2019 1:04:00 PM
Yeah, nothing like a warm, sunny day, I say! Thanks, Kim.
Date: 11/24/2019 4:24:00 AM
I'm with the sun here Gershon. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:03:00 PM
Sounds like a sunny choice, Tom. Thanks, Gershon
Date: 11/24/2019 2:55:00 AM
Beautiful my friend! I love it!;)
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Date: 11/24/2019 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for such a nice comment, Brenda. Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/24/2019 12:24:00 AM
Hi Gershon nicely quoted. Thanks for sharing this
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:02:00 PM
Thank YOU for the support, Gregory. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/23/2019 10:59:00 PM
Gershon, Love the skies, and the celestial bodies, in your poems night and day. -Richard
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2019 11:38:00 PM
Thanks for the sunny comment, Richard. Smiles all around! ~ Gershon

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