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Sagittarius

Sagittarius Strike true the star sign of the archer hunter’s heart true north while Arrows of artistic aspiration fly free from optimistic opportunity in Grand views of grace to stumble over humility’s stone in blunt speech as Inquisitive innovations turn eyes to heaven’s crystal river in the Thrill of effervescent infectious energy for risks of happiness and To the trusting essence worthy of compassion’s trust where All creatures great and small hear bubbling music’s fresh fountains while Ragged edges of unfinished rhapsodies, abandoned in new crusades of Insatiable quests for authentic unexplored astral eternity, Understand restless feet rushing in the wind - sign of fire adventures - Searcher of the stars and soul revels in laughter and vision’s arrows 3-30-21 Contest: Star Signs Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/14/2021 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations, fellow Sagittarian on your top spot win!!! Great job!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 2:30:00 PM

Thank you so much LM. Fun contest theme. Was wonderful learning about fellow soupers and friends - an astral journey through the constellations! Hope you are well. Easter season blessings to you!

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/13/2021 5:44:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing these traits of yours in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 2:28:00 PM

I am honored and humbled, Beata! It has been such a joy and a blessing to be introduced to the writings and style of the poets on the soup. I have learned much from all of you! Hope you are well. Easter season blessings my friend!

Janine Lever

Date: 4/11/2021 10:47:00 AM

I loved it. A wonderful write. I am married to a saggitarius! Well done.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 2:24:00 PM

Thank you! So happy you loved this acrostic! From a very subjective, clouded perspective I would say lucky you and lucky your husband! Loved your visit. All the best!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2021 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write with great information. Now we know more about Sagittarius. Have a blessed day..............

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 2:21:00 PM

I so enjoyed this contest. It was fun learning about the star signs of other soupers and finding other Sag! Hope you are well. Enjoy your weekend! Blessings to you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2021 5:22:00 AM

BIG congrats on your trophy win, Sam--well done!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 2:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay. It is quite an honor considering the quality of the entries! Hope you are well. Blessings!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2021 2:36:00 PM

such a creative take on the Sagittarius theme, many congrats on your trophy win Sam:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 2:18:00 PM

This was such a fun theme. Thank you Jan! The placement was a nice surprise. Take care. Hugs :)!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/10/2021 12:31:00 PM

wonderful use of language and a different angle than just merely listing the traits of the sign, well done! the poem has a headlong rushing effect when read which fits perfectly with the sign; it works well in this instance but i would just say in other pieces it might be good to slow it down with more punctuation, and also to watch for the lines getting too wordy or overcrowded..congrats on your 1st place in my contest!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 1:58:00 PM

Hi Charlotte! Most grateful for your placement and your message along with this delightful theme! Many thanks for your thoughtful and very insightful suggestions. I have to admit I have a tendency to write long, run on lines - Dickenesque - one of my very favorite authors. Learning to write in different forms here on the soup has been a wonderful training in meaning packed brevity along with writing lyrics. Hope you are doing well. All the best!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2021 1:32:00 PM

I don't know many Sagittarians, but love the wonderful qualities associated with the sign. Beautifully written, Sam. Best wishes for a big win! Have a blessed Easter. Hugs, Carolyn

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2021 1:50:00 PM

Hi Carolyn! Hope you are having a very blessed Easter season. Thank you so much for your gracious message and encouragement! It was such fun to read about the other star signs. Blessings!