Sagecroft Dreams

For thorns that dig so deep

my tears are so incomplete

tears that fall hardened to the floor

for there will never be a cure

just darkened thoughts forever more

for you say the heart will mend the mind will heel

but still the thorns tear a hole so deep

i told you I'm incomplete      
 

                                                             the nightwalker 6th october
2010
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October 7, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Duncan. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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