Saffron Sunlight

the saffron sunlight
shines halfway around the globe
— tonight my dreams dance

10/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:16 PM
this is so gorgeous. One of your best haiku, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Andrea! <3
Woods Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Very Nice
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, William!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 5:18 AM
Marvelous imagery dear, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Kiser Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Now that's a wonderful, warming pen.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Thank you, dear M.L.!
Nicole Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 8:34 PM
It is magical knowing that the sun lingers for some, while the moonlight holds moments for others. We share the same warmth and light, but at different times. May your dreams always dance. This is beautiful Kim. :) Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Thank you, Brandy!
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