Saffron Sunlight

the saffron sunlight shines halfway around the globe — tonight my dreams dance 10/1/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2018 3:16:00 PM

this is so gorgeous. One of your best haiku, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! <3

William Woods

Date: 10/2/2018 11:18:00 AM

Very Nice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you, William!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/2/2018 5:18:00 AM

Marvelous imagery dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/1/2018 9:57:00 PM

Now that's a wonderful, warming pen.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thank you, dear M.L.!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/1/2018 8:34:00 PM

It is magical knowing that the sun lingers for some, while the moonlight holds moments for others. We share the same warmth and light, but at different times. May your dreams always dance. This is beautiful Kim. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2018 9:13:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy!