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Blooms bountiful on laughter lane Purple peonies after raging rain May melodies, sunshine songs in emerald elms and garden green A waking world, scents swirled Saffron spring, scarlet ruby rose ~ Creamy clouds roam restlessly, slow. Written on 5/6/2023 For: Alliterisen Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 5/10/2023 7:11:00 PM
Poetry travels sometimes to spring. this has reached it's destination.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2023 7:46:00 PM
The lush time of the year. Thank you for your kind thoughts.
Date: 5/10/2023 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful! Images are great!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2023 6:27:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Paige. :)
Date: 5/7/2023 1:26:00 AM
Excellent alliteration and imagery. Best for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/7/2023 8:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for the happy thoughts. :)
Date: 5/6/2023 8:09:00 PM
With my eyes closed and ears open to the call of your saffron spring.Imagery is impeccable!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/6/2023 9:37:00 PM
Many thanks for the pleasure of your comment, Kim. :)
Date: 5/6/2023 6:30:00 PM
What a gorgeous set of images! I love "laughter lane" and "emerald elms"! Wonderful little spring piece, poet!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/6/2023 9:30:00 PM
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this verse, Katherine. Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 5/6/2023 5:25:00 PM
Splendid alliteration in every line-- in colors and melodies, Evelyn. Beautiful vocabulary:...saffron spring--scarlet ruby rose...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/6/2023 9:26:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Your gracious words bring smiles and delight. :)

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