Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Verse

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Saffron Spring

Blooms bountiful on laughter lane
Purple peonies after raging rain
May melodies, sunshine songs
in emerald elms and garden green
A waking world, scents swirled
Saffron spring, scarlet ruby rose ~
Creamy clouds roam restlessly, slow.


Written on 5/6/2023
For: Alliterisen Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

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John Loving Iii May 10, 2023 at 7:11 PM Poetry travels sometimes to spring. this has reached it's destination. Evelyn Judy Buehler May 10, 2023 at 7:46 PM The lush time of the year. Thank you for your kind thoughts.

Paige Hind May 10, 2023 at 3:30 PM Beautiful! Images are great! Evelyn Judy Buehler May 10, 2023 at 6:27 PM Thank you for your lovely comment, Paige. :)

Victor Buhagiar May 7, 2023 at 1:26 AM Excellent alliteration and imagery. Best for a win. Evelyn Judy Buehler May 7, 2023 at 8:42 AM Thank you very much for the happy thoughts. :)

Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2023 at 8:09 PM With my eyes closed and ears open to the call of your saffron spring.Imagery is impeccable! Evelyn Judy Buehler May 6, 2023 at 9:37 PM Many thanks for the pleasure of your comment, Kim. :)

Katharine L. Sparrow May 6, 2023 at 6:30 PM What a gorgeous set of images! I love "laughter lane" and "emerald elms"! Wonderful little spring piece, poet! Evelyn Judy Buehler May 6, 2023 at 9:30 PM I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this verse, Katherine. Thanks for your kind words.

Vijay Pandit May 6, 2023 at 5:25 PM Splendid alliteration in every line-- in colors and melodies, Evelyn. Beautiful vocabulary:...saffron spring--scarlet ruby rose... Evelyn Judy Buehler May 6, 2023 at 9:26 PM Thank you Vijay. Your gracious words bring smiles and delight. :)