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Saffron Spring

Blooms bountiful on laughter lane
Purple peonies after raging rain
May melodies, sunshine songs
in emerald elms and garden green
A waking world, scents swirled
Saffron spring, scarlet ruby rose ~
Creamy clouds roam restlessly, slow.


Written on 5/6/2023
For: Alliterisen Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2023

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John Loving Iii Date: 5/10/2023 7:11:00 PM Poetry travels sometimes to spring. this has reached it's destination. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/10/2023 7:46:00 PM The lush time of the year. Thank you for your kind thoughts.

Paige Hind Date: 5/10/2023 3:30:00 PM Beautiful! Images are great! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/10/2023 6:27:00 PM Thank you for your lovely comment, Paige. :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/7/2023 1:26:00 AM Excellent alliteration and imagery. Best for a win. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/7/2023 8:42:00 AM Thank you very much for the happy thoughts. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/6/2023 8:09:00 PM With my eyes closed and ears open to the call of your saffron spring.Imagery is impeccable! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/6/2023 9:37:00 PM Many thanks for the pleasure of your comment, Kim. :)

Katharine L. Sparrow Date: 5/6/2023 6:30:00 PM What a gorgeous set of images! I love "laughter lane" and "emerald elms"! Wonderful little spring piece, poet! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/6/2023 9:30:00 PM I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this verse, Katherine. Thanks for your kind words.

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/6/2023 5:25:00 PM Splendid alliteration in every line-- in colors and melodies, Evelyn. Beautiful vocabulary:...saffron spring--scarlet ruby rose... Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/6/2023 9:26:00 PM Thank you Vijay. Your gracious words bring smiles and delight. :)