Saffron Glow

I spent my day shopping for rubies,
Deemed they would bring luck in life.
Decided to buy a pair of ruby ear-rings as
I wished to gift them to my wife. 

I stepped into a jewelry stores. 
At once, I was perplexed.
Found the gems in myriad red colors.
The task of picking caused me to be vexed.

It was the most awaiting special day.
To her, the casket was gifted.
She shrugged her shoulders in surprise
And asked what it was with her eye-brows lifted.

When the casket was opened, 
Discerned a fine saffron glow, 
Mistook it the crimson of ruby rings
But it was of her rosy cheeks, how lucky to know!



First Line Prompt - 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:       Julia Ward 
Date: 13-07-2020
place : Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Ward Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 2:47 AM
Nicely done. Congratulations!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Such a lovely end to this tale Patri. Beautiful muse. Congratulations on your win! :)
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 7:48 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
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