Safety In Numbers

Shoals
swirling
in the sky-
like locusts in
flight-
as
light fades
the massing
starlings roost at
night

Note.Scene on the Somerset levels

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/4/2008 1:48:00 PM
this brings to mind a floating scene with what is to come, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/3/2008 3:52:00 PM
So very vivid and beautiful. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 10/3/2008 8:13:00 AM
Wonderful images here!! Can see it like a painting! Nicely done~Carrie
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