Safely Home

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                                           Morning drive
                                        Dark, scary,arrive
                             Relief, going home early sunrise
                    Red on the horizon looking to eastern skies
                  Now no clouds or impurities that could disguise
                           As I bid grandson loving shaloam
                                  On the road again roam
                                           Safely Home




(Trois Par Huit is not on the list..
Entered as Rhyme>>)
(My grandson who lives with
me has gone to work..I am
having to transport him..It
is dark when I leave home
every morning..)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:33 AM
excellent words here my friend thank you duncan
Weaver Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 7:35 AM
That is nice and thank you for your comment,Johneesha
Neels Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Sara, what a beautiful write.. This made me smile :) love Wilma
Freeman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 6:20 PM
That's letting the thought roll out Sara. We need to do more of this. Agape, Moses
A   Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM
wonderful, Sara the thought of alone is scary, glad a relief is lifted when you gp home, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 2:50 PM
I like the red horizon....nicely done
Rhinem Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Smile ~ Or, a night without a day but, don't be afraid dear because, "You Have 'The Father of Light' Wherein, 'Everything,' Is 'Eternally Bright!!!'" ~ "Lovely Poe From 'A Precious Heart; Beautiful'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Beautiful & Priceless, Sara Kendrick;'" Bye!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Smile ~ Fear of death "Always" amazes myself amid many whom hold its shadows so near as if, it were something more than just a door ~ But, upon the other hand well, for some, there is "An Eternity," they must surely soon, consider...."Thank You" for stopping by the other day "Beautiful Sara Kendrick" &, "Yes," that artificial sweetener is kind of like, a sea without a shore ~ ....Cont:)
Iyer Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 11:49 AM
NICE way to say adieu loved it, suresh
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:11 AM
A nice goodbye to your grandson, sara
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