Sadness

Sadness crashes against my beating heart
like storm driven waves against the shore
Slowly…inevitably eating away at the shell
that protects the loving and caring core
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Breidenthal Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 5:22 AM
Very amazing four lines. Well-made and great! -JWE
Rodd Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Sadness can deliver a horrific blow and you've captured it well in this dark and brooding piece. Well done.
Michael Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Eventually, there will be no sadness anymore... Nice poem...All the best Michael
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