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Sadness crashes against my beating heart like storm driven waves against the shore Slowly…inevitably eating away at the shell that protects the loving and caring core

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 4/4/2018 5:22:00 AM
Very amazing four lines. Well-made and great! -JWE
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Date: 1/3/2018 7:22:00 PM
Sadness can deliver a horrific blow and you've captured it well in this dark and brooding piece. Well done.
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:38:00 PM
Eventually, there will be no sadness anymore... Nice poem...All the best Michael
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