Sadness

This sadness is seeping
Leaking, spilling out
Of every cell in my body.
Craving a bullet
A rope
Or pills
To
End 
This 
Pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Clemons Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Sadness explained perfectly in this short piece, amazing choice of imagery in this short piece. Enjoyable piece. Check out some of my poems,might find some you like, Peace.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 6:50 AM
An intense work of art...Please keep writing! !!
Breidenthal Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Each word is caked with that title. Thank goodness it doesn't last forever. Hope you have a great rest of the week and write on! I enjoy your raw and emotional material. Can't wait to read some more. Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 2:44 PM
- Painful thoughts and bereavement - well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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