Sadly

sadly I thought you were my friend I thought you were my enemy but now I’m so confused I can't see anything sometimes you're there when I fall but other times you drop me like a hot iron ball it makes me wonder are we even friends at all? Sometimes I win others I lose but why cant you just choose I’m your friend or am I not? Cuz I’m starting to wonder a lot you know your my friend but am I yours? But I’m tired of getting my face slammed in open doors so make up your mind before I lose mine dedicated to M.G.S u know who you are

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Andrew Nashat

Date: 4/29/2011 3:08:00 PM

All of us encounter this problem I guess, but you brought it out in a lovely way :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/29/2011 1:51:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jasmine. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I hope the sun shines down upon you and brings joy into your heart. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/29/2011 5:39:00 AM

We have this problem our whole lifes because most people are not honest with each other and because folks have different idea about what a FRIEND is suppose to "do?" "act like?"[I got your soup mail, you did fine;)] Your form is Verse that's a safe choice if you ryhme all the way though you can put Rhyme as the form. Light and Love

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 4/28/2011 8:00:00 PM

Very cute poem. I think we all have had those types of friends. Thanks for the visit today.