Sadly

sadly
I thought you were my friend
I thought you were my enemy
but now I’m so confused I can't see anything
sometimes you're there when I fall
but other times you drop me like a hot iron  ball
it makes me wonder
are we even friends at all?
Sometimes I win
others I lose
but why cant you just choose
I’m your friend or am I not?
Cuz I’m starting to wonder a lot
you know your my friend
but am I yours?
But I’m tired of getting my face slammed in open doors
so make up your mind
before I lose mine

dedicated to M.G.S
u know who you are
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Nashat Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 3:08 PM
All of us encounter this problem I guess, but you brought it out in a lovely way :)
Brown Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 1:51 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jasmine. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I hope the sun shines down upon you and brings joy into your heart. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 5:39 AM
We have this problem our whole lifes because most people are not honest with each other and because folks have different idea about what a FRIEND is suppose to "do?" "act like?"[I got your soup mail, you did fine;)] Your form is Verse that's a safe choice if you ryhme all the way though you can put Rhyme as the form. Light and Love
Larocca Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Very cute poem. I think we all have had those types of friends. Thanks for the visit today.
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