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nothing happens tears despair dripping in response drift downwards detached splashes the sorrow in tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/18/2020 9:37:00 AM
Take a deep breath and smile. Tears as well as smiles are just part of life cycle. Nice work.
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Brian Strand
Date: 5/18/2020 10:07:00 AM
Indeed Lochan,cheers

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