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saddle

Sits on top of a horse's back
All worn out it has a little crack 
Did a lot of work in its younger days
Dirty and old it's not worth a good pay
Locked up now in a storage shelf
End of time for his good ole self

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2016 5:20:00 PM
Amy C...., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/24/2016 2:25:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:58:00 AM
Hello and welcome, I think you will find us a friendly lot. I tend to be possibly more critical than most but I hope I do so in an encouraging way. I enjoyed this, your first offering and hope there will be many more to follow.
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Date: 10/23/2016 3:35:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath
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