Saddest Sin

He said he remembered when, 
when all the pain within, over took him, 
He said please don't cry my friend, when,
when i kneel'd next to him,

Goodbye my sin I said, 
as i raised my hands to him, 
all the pain from deep within,
oh all the pain came back again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 26, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Saddened this is,, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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