Saddened Hopes

Shaking, sitting on
The floor in which I weep in,
Sighing, crying, frown,

I hear footsteps come,
They come closer and closer,
Stop silence is among us,

The floor is cold chills,
Who travel along my spine,
Shivers sadden now,

A drop of hope rolls,
Streams down the bone of my cheek,
Froze upon my lip.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 11, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Good afternoon Amanda. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol
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