Sad Smile

“Sad Smile” This Shoddy world gave you the ground to gloom… Would not let your innocent soul to bloom… Don’t cast down & put your smile out of the sight… For the countless People you could become sun light… Live! Live for the people who you want to care… Give an account of the plot you want to share… You should feel heaven for the reason you would live… A part of your innocent smile if you could give… By- Gautam Date on – 30th Oct 2015

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/3/2015 7:00:00 AM

Congratulations Gautam.

Mr Gautam
Date: 12/3/2015 7:51:00 PM

Thanks a lot !! :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/3/2015 4:23:00 AM

Brilliant write Gautam.. congrats on fine win!

Mr Gautam
Date: 12/3/2015 7:51:00 PM

Thanks a lot !! :)

Skat A

Date: 12/2/2015 11:40:00 PM

Gautam, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 11/23/2015 1:48:00 PM

'Live! Live for the people who you want to care…' all too true in these uncertain times. thanks for sharing.

Mr Gautam
Date: 11/23/2015 7:39:00 PM

Thanks a lot ! :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 11/21/2015 11:32:00 AM

"A part of your innocent smile if you could give", it's not if you could, but we all can, i believe.. :) thanks for the thought.. God bless

Mr Gautam
Date: 11/21/2015 11:56:00 AM

Yeah you are right....we all can give our smile....but if you know this vicious world. People are not ready to share even smiles. And in this poem i have tried to expound that itslef. With that line....i mean. If you could share your happiness with others then it would be really great. But in this vicious wolrd. People are more self centered. Anyways thanks for reading. I hope you like it. ^^

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 11/19/2015 12:31:00 AM

A smile can be a powerful tool, and make a huge difference to someone's perspective. Nicely done!

Mr Gautam
Date: 11/19/2015 1:30:00 AM

True...thanks for reading !! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/4/2015 8:54:00 PM

A fine and very uplifting poem! Great message, well written. A7

Mr Gautam
Date: 11/15/2015 10:16:00 PM

Thanks a lot !! :)