Sad Realities

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Fail To Achieve Personal And society Suppositions, make me feel like An outcast that failed to pursue the traced objetives Feeling drowned in a deep well, without seeing the light, even with the aid of a pill 4-23-2016

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Rob Carmack

Date: 4/24/2016 11:26:00 AM

Nayda, sometimes you have to trace your own objectives, keeping in mind, that no success will be greater than a loving and kind heart. This poem really pulled me in.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/24/2016 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Rob for your feedback and for visiting my poem. Blessings, Nayda

Lu Loo

Date: 4/23/2016 2:01:00 PM

Nayda, you write the best Fibonacci poems as well as Haiku..always have known that! :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/23/2016 2:53:00 PM

Thank you Laura.

Bonnie Jennings

Date: 4/23/2016 9:19:00 AM

Awe, yes... I understand. Sometimes living feels like this and the best "pill" is natural endorphins, love... Being a Psych nurse for umpteen years can honestly say, the pills are temporary, but endorphins are real and lasting and free... Your poem reflects the thoughts of many many people and I too have experienced this... The best to YOU! Bonnie

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/23/2016 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Bonnie