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Sad Realities

Fail
To 
Achieve 
Personal 
And society
Suppositions, make me feel like
An outcast that failed to pursue the traced objetives
Feeling drowned in a deep well, without seeing the light, even with the aid of a pill 











4-23-2016
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Carmack Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Nayda, sometimes you have to trace your own objectives, keeping in mind, that no success will be greater than a loving and kind heart. This poem really pulled me in.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Rob for your feedback and for visiting my poem. Blessings, Nayda
Scars Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Nayda, you write the best Fibonacci poems as well as Haiku..always have known that! :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Laura.
Jennings Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Awe, yes... I understand. Sometimes living feels like this and the best "pill" is natural endorphins, love... Being a Psych nurse for umpteen years can honestly say, the pills are temporary, but endorphins are real and lasting and free... Your poem reflects the thoughts of many many people and I too have experienced this... The best to YOU! Bonnie
Negron Flores Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Bonnie
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