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Sad Farewell Seated

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.... ........
hushed whispers...
slammed on the .........
window pane, shadow
forged with swaying impulses
echoes of this morning. Previous night
Under a single old solitary demesne..I...
shouted the summer tune ../
drizzle, sealed within my soul
Indelibly, Endless no longer exists
shed among the jumble of bytes
our sprawled glimpses Beyond the
long-standing weave. You felt without
a goodbye... and I stood there... serene
of suffocating embers, its hefty kernels
strewn throughout the hues of life. The stars
* no longer share my space, amidst hollowness
* behind every shooting star's trail
* Every morning I get up in dread.
/----------------------- \ of missing to
/ \ **hear
/ \ YOUR
/ \ last words
/ \ YOUR
/ \ probable parting
/ \

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/2/2023 4:02:00 PM

A sad farewell indeed my friend articulated in your effective shape poem. Your words linger like a sad veil over morning. So effective Lasaad! Congratulations on your podium win! So well written especially the metaphoric use of the storm. Blessings!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/1/2023 9:55:00 AM

WONDERFUL So nice ! I am whelmed. I don't know how to put my admiration in words.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/1/2023 7:35:00 AM

Not only a master poet, but an artist as well. Congratulations on this amazing entry to the contest my friend. The distinction earned was no surprise. It was an obvious podium winner, from inception.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/28/2023 3:07:00 PM

My heart became heavier as I read. Such a melancholy poem. Your amazing presentation was uplifting, and your words so heartfelt and touching. A masterpiece. You are so talented my friend.