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Sad Farewell Seated

............. .... ........ hushed whispers... slammed on the ......... window pane, shadow forged with swaying impulses echoes of this morning. Previous night Under a single old solitary demesne..I... shouted the summer tune ../ drizzle, sealed within my soul Indelibly, Endless no longer exists shed among the jumble of bytes our sprawled glimpses Beyond the long-standing weave. You felt without a goodbye... and I stood there... serene of suffocating embers, its hefty kernels strewn throughout the hues of life. The stars * no longer share my space, amidst hollowness * behind every shooting star's trail * Every morning I get up in dread. /----------------------- \ of missing to / \ **hear / \ YOUR / \ last words / \ YOUR / \ probable parting / \

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Date: 7/2/2023 4:02:00 PM
A sad farewell indeed my friend articulated in your effective shape poem. Your words linger like a sad veil over morning. So effective Lasaad! Congratulations on your podium win! So well written especially the metaphoric use of the storm. Blessings!
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Date: 7/1/2023 9:55:00 AM
WONDERFUL So nice ! I am whelmed. I don't know how to put my admiration in words.
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:35:00 AM
Not only a master poet, but an artist as well. Congratulations on this amazing entry to the contest my friend. The distinction earned was no surprise. It was an obvious podium winner, from inception.
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Date: 6/28/2023 3:07:00 PM
My heart became heavier as I read. Such a melancholy poem. Your amazing presentation was uplifting, and your words so heartfelt and touching. A masterpiece. You are so talented my friend.
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Date: 6/28/2023 10:28:00 AM
- Woow ... sad ... but excellet done, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 6/28/2023 5:06:00 AM
Wonderfully done shape poem, Lasaad. Really fantastic work! Blessings to you...
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Date: 6/27/2023 4:03:00 PM
Awe! Your art work is fantastic.
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Date: 6/27/2023 1:23:00 PM
Amazing work in forming the shape, Sotto. Well done, poet.
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