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Inspired by Line Gauthier's haiku, 'Mesmerizing,' posted Sept. 01, 2019...

Sad Eyes

mesmerized eyes sad
 
   into pond's ripples merging

       deep pools of water  


       

      September 02, 2019
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Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2019

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September 4, 2019 at 9:18 AM

Nicely done, my friend!

September 4, 2019 at 2:10 PM

Thank you, Kim! ~ gw

September 3, 2019 at 8:11 PM

Beautifully penned Gershon, this haiku speaks in depths like the subject does... great write :) hugs

September 4, 2019 at 2:10 PM

Thank you so much for the kind words, Sandra. :) gw

September 3, 2019 at 4:41 PM

Wow this was really nice Gershon even if there are sad eyes makes mine smile!;)

September 3, 2019 at 8:06 PM

Ah see you are too kind;)

September 3, 2019 at 4:51 PM

Your smile is the silver lining in the cloud, Brenda. Thank you so much for the nice feedback. :) gw

September 3, 2019 at 2:31 AM

Can feel the sadness and dispair in your haiku Gershon. Tom

September 3, 2019 at 4:50 PM

Appreciate the empathetic feedback, Tom. ~ gw

September 2, 2019 at 9:59 PM

Lovely, Gershon.

September 3, 2019 at 4:50 PM

Thank you for the 'lovely feedback,' Line! :) gw

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