Sad Eyes

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Inspired by Line Gauthier's haiku, 'Mesmerizing,' posted Sept. 01, 2019...

mesmerized eyes sad into pond's ripples merging deep pools of water September 02, 2019 'one haiku' Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Date: 9/4/2019 9:18:00 AM

Nicely done, my friend!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2019 2:10:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! ~ gw

Date: 9/3/2019 8:11:00 PM

Beautifully penned Gershon, this haiku speaks in depths like the subject does... great write :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2019 2:10:00 PM

Thank you so much for the kind words, Sandra. :) gw

Date: 9/3/2019 4:41:00 PM

Wow this was really nice Gershon even if there are sad eyes makes mine smile!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2019 8:06:00 PM

Ah see you are too kind;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 4:51:00 PM

Your smile is the silver lining in the cloud, Brenda. Thank you so much for the nice feedback. :) gw

Date: 9/3/2019 2:31:00 AM

Can feel the sadness and dispair in your haiku Gershon. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 4:50:00 PM

Appreciate the empathetic feedback, Tom. ~ gw

Date: 9/2/2019 9:59:00 PM

Lovely, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thank you for the 'lovely feedback,' Line! :) gw