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Sad Endings

Shunned by silence, no hope at all, There are no messages-- no texts; no calls. What saddens most, in this quiet end, is I only really ever wanted to call him Friend.

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Mr Gautam

Date: 11/18/2015 11:54:00 PM

Could understand the pain hidden behind this amazingly well written poem.....Great work.... Be strong !!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 11/19/2015 12:28:00 AM

Thank you for reading!

Rowdy Yates

Date: 10/6/2015 4:48:00 PM

I love poems that rhyme they are my favorite. I guess this comes from the love of dr. Seuss. But this poem sums it up. Waiting for the call of a special person and getting ignored.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 10/6/2015 5:22:00 PM

Hmmm, I grew up on Dr Seuss too, but oddly enough as much of my work is free verse as rhyme. Sometimes there's just not much that needs to be said. Thanks for stopping by Rowdy!

Jude Kyrie

Date: 9/29/2015 1:13:00 PM

this post uses an economy of words to spell out the silence of relationships that emotionally end. and teaches us that what we miss is the comfort of friendship and a companion. it contains a sad truth most Elequently projected with the tip of a fine pen. well done Jude

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 9/29/2015 2:07:00 PM

Thank you very much Jude. Loosing friends is sad. Jan

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/23/2015 11:28:00 PM

I dropped by to read this a second time! :)

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 8/24/2015 8:59:00 PM

Arthur. Re-reads are always a compliment...especially if you still like it the second go round...LOL, Jan

Aurore Severo

Date: 7/28/2015 9:55:00 AM

I like this, I have had these feelings.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 8/2/2015 9:07:00 PM

So sorry you had to go through this. Hopefully it's no longer painful.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/21/2015 11:30:00 PM

This beauty really resonates, great poem!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 7/22/2015 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Sir Arthur. ;-)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/21/2015 7:57:00 AM

Heartbreaking but meaningful a 7 Hugs Eve

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 7/21/2015 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve. Always appreciate your comments.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/21/2015 7:08:00 AM

'Shunned by silence' Perfect first line for a melancholy but elegantly written poem...Go directly to my fav poets list. Do not pass go...

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 7/21/2015 10:27:00 AM

Thanks Tim. There are many ways to shun a person. Absolute silence is one of the harshest, I think. Thanks for the fave! Hugs~Janet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2015 4:04:00 PM

I really like this. It is a short poignant poem. Simple is often better.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 7/20/2015 10:40:00 PM

I agree. If I can say it in senryu or tanka, why would I use 13 lines for a sonnet? Or use a bunch of quatrains. Sometimes shorter writes are more open to interpretation, or we go one in a longer write and the message is missed because we were too wordy. Thanks Andrea for stopping by. Hugs x

Hannington Mumo

Date: 7/20/2015 9:28:00 AM

A melancholy piece that captures the reality of life...A well-deserved 7!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 7/20/2015 11:10:00 AM

Thank you much for those kind words, Hannington