Sad Dizain

We drove down the lushy serene hill side
                        cherishing the cool drive through shaded woods
                                 with cascading waterfalls alongside
                                   Intoxication by fresh pinewoods
                           made us stop to breathe in the misty woods
                                   A decade later this paradise bled
                                   horrendously naked in rocky bed
                                Under the dusky sky stood the outline 
                              of a dark bare tree with its ribs outspread
                                A forest fire had scorched out all pine


                                                   May 20, 2016
                                                   For Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Awesome looking win...skat
Cheema Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Thanks for finding it awesome, Skat!
Canerdy Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Balveen, this is really good--a 7 for sure. Congrats on your win. Janice
Cheema Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Many thanks, Janice!
Davey Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:45 AM
What a great way to bring awareness to such a hazardous problem! Great write and congrats on making the winners list
Cheema Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Brian!
Misra Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Congrats, Balveen, on your win. It was fantastic to pick destruction of nature as your theme. ~karam~
Cheema Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Thanks Karam dear!
Devnath  Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Destruction of nature, it's very sad poem my lovely friend. Beautifully done. Congratulation my lovely friend. loved always, bl
Cheema Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Thanks Devnath!
Scars Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Balveen, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Cheema Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Thanks Luloo!
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