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Skeletal frame this autumn rose has lain, through bitter chill that wore her glory down for only whittled veins of time remain, of what was night's luster and wondrous crown. Laying on breast of final days, a brown skin crumpled from moon's sheen to air's foam, to rest in a cavern of whitened tomb. Oh, her fragile petals hovered mid-air releasing the hint of dark-tinted chrome and extinguish the grandeur that was there. Contest: Sad Poem- Dizain for Laura Loo 5/18/2016

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Date: 7/12/2016 1:36:00 AM
Nette, awesome looking win...skat
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Date: 5/21/2016 4:44:00 AM
Very deep write Nette I really enjoyed the story sad as it is! Congrats on your placement
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:55:00 AM
Congrats, Nette, on your win. The lines were awesome. ~karam~
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:08:00 PM
Lost love is always sad, beautifully done. Congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:54:00 PM
Nette, a wonderfully sad poem, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:30:00 PM
very sad indeed but in a beautiful way that you styled this one ,Nette.
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Date: 5/18/2016 10:31:00 AM
Wicked lines. Such an impact on the soul. How we could all fade. Wonderfully done.
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Date: 5/18/2016 9:17:00 AM
I feel a certain parallelism of your theme to life's sorrow or demise. Deep, outstanding poem to be read aloud!
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:16:00 AM
Sad but well done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/17/2016 6:30:00 PM
Well done Nette...love the last line; poignant.
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Date: 5/17/2016 5:43:00 PM
Nothing sadder than the fate of the wilted rose. lovely poem nette
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