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Sad Dizain

Skeletal frame this autumn rose has lain, through bitter chill that wore her glory down for only whittled veins of time remain, of what was night's luster and wondrous crown. Laying on breast of final days, a brown skin crumpled from moon's sheen to air's foam, to rest in a cavern of whitened tomb. Oh, her fragile petals hovered mid-air releasing the hint of dark-tinted chrome and extinguish the grandeur that was there. Contest: Sad Poem- Dizain for Laura Loo 5/18/2016
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A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Nette, awesome looking win...skat
Davey Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:44 AM
Very deep write Nette I really enjoyed the story sad as it is! Congrats on your placement
Misra Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:55 AM
Congrats, Nette, on your win. The lines were awesome. ~karam~
Devnath  Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Lost love is always sad, beautifully done. Congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Nette, a wonderfully sad poem, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 3:30 PM
very sad indeed but in a beautiful way that you styled this one ,Nette.
Tacito Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Wicked lines. Such an impact on the soul. How we could all fade. Wonderfully done.
Lalion Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 9:17 AM
I feel a certain parallelism of your theme to life's sorrow or demise. Deep, outstanding poem to be read aloud!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Sad but well done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Capitano Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Well done Nette...love the last line; poignant.
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Nothing sadder than the fate of the wilted rose. lovely poem nette
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