Sad Dizain

SAD DIZAIN

      When destiny betrays, sorrow is less,
           but if faith be deceived, grudge can be grown.
               Wrath and anger burn surpassing sadness.
                    Hostile circumstances are not to mourn,
                     but turn tragic, if I approach alone.
                     Failure is so sad to experience,
                 when I am confident of competence.
              Sad refusal, sad is separation
           Yet, both appear as common occurrence.
        Sorrow is endured, if shared by loved one.     

   05/16/16
 
  Contest by Laura Loo    Second Place     

  Sadness Contest by Silent One   Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 1:38 AM
Well done Anisha...skat
Dutta Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Skat
Misra Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:22 AM
Congrats, Anisha, on your win. ~karam~
Dutta Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Karam
Scars Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Anisha, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Dutta Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Laura
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Lovely patterning of your lines here, Anisha. Good luck in the contest.
Dutta Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Thanks Andrea to visit
May Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Very good Dizain Anisha ...best wishes
Dutta Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Thanks Joseph
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