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Sad Dizain

And they lived happily ever after Most of the love stories say in the end Sharing smiles, echoing loads of laughter Never ever having to break or bend That’s not what really happens, my friend! Seen the rosy life off to a great start Pause for cash to pay for food in the cart They go to work at dawn; come back at dusk Toiling the full day bent at desks apart Where’s the time to inhale love’s flowing musk? Written 05/16/2016

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Skat A

Date: 7/12/2016 1:35:00 AM

Well done Sara. Skat

Karam Misra

Date: 5/21/2016 1:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Sara. You said it like it is. ~karam~

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/21/2016 7:15:00 AM

Thanks a lot Karam!

Lu Loo

Date: 5/20/2016 1:50:00 PM

Sara, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/20/2016 2:26:00 PM

thanks Laura:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/17/2016 6:58:00 PM

Very true these days, Sara...retirement does not come easy to many. You have captured this sad reality in your well-written Dizain poem. Best wishes for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/18/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, yes I wanted to write about something other than death.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2016 8:38:00 PM

well done with those rhyming words. Dusk and musk. Love those two. This is the everyday sadness of romance gone bad!!

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/17/2016 7:43:00 AM

Thanks a lot Andrea!