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Sad Dizain

Cannot cry, tears don't know which way to go they are caught in an emotional maze bottled up tears, have formed a wall of woe The nose may run, but the eyes simply glaze Such repressed sorrow is more than a phase Crystallized dam has been growing for years Fortified fortress of blood, pus and fears Feelings that are deemed way over the top Afraid to release this floodgate of tears Once the crying starts it may never stop 5/15/16

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Date: 7/12/2016 1:40:00 AM
Dineen,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 7/16/2016 8:02:00 AM
Hey there Skat, that was such a kind compliment. Thank you for that and for your support as well.
Date: 5/21/2016 5:41:00 PM
a sad and weepy one as well. Good job with this contest entry. Congratulations.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/23/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and your congratulations as well Andrea.
Date: 5/21/2016 4:29:00 AM
Great write and congrats on your placement, well deserved
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/23/2016 10:53:00 AM
I thank you for your kind comment, as well as your congrats Brian.
Date: 5/21/2016 2:47:00 AM
The last line is so true in my case. Congratulations on a great win:)
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/23/2016 10:51:00 AM
I'm sorry the last line is true in your case, hopefully not for always. Thank you so much for the congratulations.
Date: 5/20/2016 7:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dineen
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/23/2016 10:50:00 AM
I thank you Joseph.
Date: 5/20/2016 2:53:00 PM
Emotional suppression in sadness beautifully expressed my lovely friend. Congrats on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/23/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank you BL, for your congratulations and support.
Date: 5/20/2016 1:28:00 PM
Dineen, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/23/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and kind consideration Laura, I enjoyed participating.
Date: 5/18/2016 10:25:00 PM
a heartfelt write. CT
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/19/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you for your comment CT, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/15/2016 8:52:00 PM
an emotional heartfelt one. WEll done, Dineen. A good cry is ok sometimes!!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/19/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thank you much Andrea, yes a good cry is cleansing, appreciated.
Date: 5/15/2016 5:48:00 PM
Wow Dineen, almost made me want to cry. Well done. Regards, Craig
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/19/2016 5:32:00 PM
Gee, thank you for your kind comment Craig, appreciated.
Date: 5/15/2016 2:13:00 PM
A meloncholic piece of writing. Well written.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/19/2016 1:36:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Lenny, much appreciated.

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