Dineen Williams Gault Poet Dizain

Sad Dizain

Cannot cry, tears don't know which way to go
they are caught in an emotional maze
bottled up tears, have formed a wall of woe
The nose may run, but the eyes simply glaze
Such repressed sorrow is more than a phase
Crystallized dam has been growing for years
Fortified fortress of blood, pus and fears
Feelings that are deemed way over the top
Afraid to release this floodgate of tears
Once the crying starts it may never stop




5/15/16

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Skat A July 12, 2016 at 1:40 AM Dineen,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT* Dineen Williams Gault July 16, 2016 at 8:02 AM Hey there Skat, that was such a kind compliment. Thank you for that and for your support as well.

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2016 at 5:41 PM a sad and weepy one as well. Good job with this contest entry. Congratulations. Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:54 AM Thank you for your comment and your congratulations as well Andrea.

Brian Davey May 21, 2016 at 4:29 AM Great write and congrats on your placement, well deserved Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:53 AM I thank you for your kind comment, as well as your congrats Brian.

Joanna Daniel May 21, 2016 at 2:47 AM The last line is so true in my case. Congratulations on a great win:) Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:51 AM I'm sorry the last line is true in your case, hopefully not for always. Thank you so much for the congratulations.

Joseph May May 20, 2016 at 7:48 PM Congrats on your win Dineen Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:50 AM I thank you Joseph.

Bl Devnath May 20, 2016 at 2:53 PM Emotional suppression in sadness beautifully expressed my lovely friend. Congrats on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:49 AM Thank you BL, for your congratulations and support.

Beautiful Scars May 20, 2016 at 1:28 PM Dineen, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:48 AM Thank you very much for your congrats and kind consideration Laura, I enjoyed participating.

C T May 18, 2016 at 10:25 PM a heartfelt write. CT Dineen Williams Gault May 19, 2016 at 5:36 PM Thank you for your comment CT, I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2016 at 8:52 PM an emotional heartfelt one. WEll done, Dineen. A good cry is ok sometimes!! Dineen Williams Gault May 19, 2016 at 5:33 PM Thank you much Andrea, yes a good cry is cleansing, appreciated.

Old Man Emu May 15, 2016 at 5:48 PM Wow Dineen, almost made me want to cry. Well done. Regards, Craig Dineen Williams Gault May 19, 2016 at 5:32 PM Gee, thank you for your kind comment Craig, appreciated.

Lenny Gazbowski May 15, 2016 at 2:13 PM A meloncholic piece of writing. Well written. Dineen Williams Gault May 19, 2016 at 1:36 PM Thank you for your comment Lenny, much appreciated.