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The first publicly released picture of Genie, taken just after California authorities took control of her care at the age of 13.

Born April 18, 1957 (age 59)
Arcadia, California, United States
Known for Victim of severe child abuse and research subject in language acquisition

    

Genie Feral Child A victim of severe abuse, neglect Left alone in social isolation Subjugated in darkness to reflect Suffocating ultimate frustration Internal anguish, no consolation Father, shamed of my subnormality Kept me locked away from reality Thirteen years, strapped into a child’s toilet Or bound in my crib from humanity Forbid anyone near and to forget 5/14/2016 for the contest :Sad Dizain Sponsored by: Laura Loo https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Genie_(feral_child)

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Date: 7/12/2016 1:45:00 AM
Eve, good luck in poem....sk6
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Date: 5/21/2016 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine effort...It doesn't get sadder that that...Larry
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Larry, for reading and the congratulations. This was hard to read and also write. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/21/2016 5:54:00 AM
This is indeed sad, people are capable of such cruelty. Congrats on top spot.
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Date: 5/21/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. This was hard to read and also write. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/21/2016 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot win:)
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:30:00 AM
Sad and sorry state well expressed. Congrats, Eve, on your top placing. ~karam~
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Karam, for the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 3:59:00 PM
More than sad, well captured. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/21/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thank you, Kim for reading and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 3:10:00 PM
WOW this on is so powerful! Well Done, Congrats Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you, Lukas, for the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 3:08:00 PM
Hi, Eve. Back to congratulate you on your First Place win in the 'sad dizain' poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, for the congratulations. And I am loving your work even more with the audio it really gives it human emotion. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 2:46:00 PM
Very powerful write Eve and about a subject that I have a lot of history with for I have seen much abuse in my time! Congrats on your deserving win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Brian, for the congratulations. Yes, it is terrible that this still goes on. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 2:37:00 PM
Really it's a very sad poem. Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, B.L., for the congratulations and the wonderful inspiring compliment and 7. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 1:16:00 PM
Eve, I loved this. You wrote the true essence of what I was looking for. thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement! -luloo :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2016 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for the wonderful placement. I'm so tickled I was able to be able to do a write you would enjoy. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/20/2016 2:53:00 AM
The cruelties in this world are so many:( You have brought it strongly to the fore.
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Date: 5/19/2016 12:17:00 PM
Totally heart-wrenching and you've penned it so well Eve!
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Date: 5/17/2016 6:09:00 PM
eve, this is a riveting piece... though i cringe, your work is definitely incredible..God bless the children..huggs
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:30:00 PM
Oh, Eve. This is beyond sad. You have imaged her suffering so powerfully in your poem. I must read the info at the link. Best wishes for the contest. So sad. Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/16/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, I read this and it broke my heart. I can not fathom the idea a parent could do that to his own child.

Book: Shattered Sighs