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Sad Day

Sadness of the heart
when our loved ones do depart
to the promise land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 2/15/2018 11:17:00 PM
Says it all. Lovely, Phyllis.
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:32:00 PM
Very wistful words Phyllis.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:28:00 PM
Sad indeed, for we do miss them, but sometimes glad when they are suffering. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/2/2010 11:41:00 PM
it's sad,, and it hurts to have someone leave,.. but then we must believe of that promise land
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:37:00 AM
I'm fav'ing this one Phyllis ! In the last 7yrs., I've lost my grandson, nephew, and most recently, my mother. I have faith ! TY for this inspirational poetry ! james
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:51:00 PM
Yes, but a glad day for THEM, just not for us ,So true! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/13/2010 11:19:00 AM
Yes Phyllis ..sad but we will see them all again soon.. appreciate all your very sweet comments and compliments to my poetry .. all inspiration first and foremost comes from the Master Creator ..then all my own personal life experiences.. all the words come from both sources.. glad u have enjoyed them.. the Sestinas are brand new for me but I so enjoy writing using this form now.. appreciate all your wonderful words to me.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:28:00 PM
I think most will relate to this one as most have lost loved ones. This captures the reality of grief even though we know our loved ones are in a better place. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:06:00 AM
then you know how i feel. john
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Date: 5/11/2010 4:21:00 AM
It is easier for those that go than those that are left behind...We miss them terribly...Keep the creative and thoughtful pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2010 3:48:00 AM
well captured!!
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Date: 5/11/2010 1:50:00 AM
Sad indeed, Phyllis. The only solace we find is in knowing they will enter heaven and we shall meet again one day. Very heart-felt haiku. Love, carolyn
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