Sad

as  seeing dead children, women & men in gaza,  my  heart is painful.
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Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Dear Alfonso, indeed it is heart-wrenching to see innocents caught up in the bloodshed of war. They always suffer the most. Your poetic pen shines with empathy. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest with your timely monoku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 10:00 PM
Thank you for your loud speaking the truth ... which expressed your feeling about atrocities ( crime against humanity ) Thanks for your wise comment ... as showing Ubuntu. You are welcome Alfonso
Goldsmith Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your "Sad" write. The world is a very sad place. Have a blessed/great day writing away....................
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Thank you for your concern , and encouragement Paula. You are welcome
One Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:48 AM
It is heart breaking.. Congratulations on your placement.
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:26 PM
Thank you for your placement and compliment You are welcome
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