Sad

as seeing dead children, women & men in gaza, my heart is painful.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/22/2023 4:50:00 PM

Dear Alfonso, indeed it is heart-wrenching to see innocents caught up in the bloodshed of war. They always suffer the most. Your poetic pen shines with empathy. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest with your timely monoku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 10/22/2023 10:00:00 PM

Thank you for your loud speaking the truth ... which expressed your feeling about atrocities ( crime against humanity ) Thanks for your wise comment ... as showing Ubuntu. You are welcome Alfonso

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your "Sad" write. The world is a very sad place. Have a blessed/great day writing away....................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 10/19/2023 10:28:00 PM

Thank you for your concern , and encouragement Paula. You are welcome

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:48:00 AM

It is heart breaking.. Congratulations on your placement.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 10/19/2023 10:26:00 PM

Thank you for your placement and compliment You are welcome