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I'm Not Heavy, I'm Their Mother -- On Being a Burden — Integrated Catholic  Life™

Sacrifice

she knows naught of a life that is her own,
          so giving all she has to mate and brood ...
               and tho deep-down within, she burns alone,
     for just one treasured passion that is hers,
her kids and husband, precious saboteurs ...
          require her love, and selfless fortitude.

a dream of dancing feet is now the haunt
          of little feet that danced into her heart,
               and one knight, true, her charming confidant.
     so maybe, one day, she will twirl her toes,
but she has no regrets, as goodness knows ...
          a wife and mother ... play the grandest parts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Beautifully written, Gregory! Well done in capturing the woman's point of view. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:47 PM
lovely sentiment - please let me know the title of your LeGuin piece? I missed your last soup mail. Light & Love
Barden Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Thank you so much, Debbie! (Where I missed submitting it here I added it to a submission to a magazine, but will post it here as soon as it's denied, which I anticipate, lol. Soup Mail is a tricky thing, I've found - many of my "sent" mails just disappear, and the others only go back one page).
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:07 PM
A wonderful tribute to the virtues and vicissitudes of motherhood, and to the women who morph from wives to mothers. It takes a sensitive soul like yours, my friend, to comprehend the challenge involved as well as the everlasting rewards Kudos! :) Gershon
Barden Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:20 PM
That's very kind of you, Gershon, and I greatly appreciate the wonderful comments! Blessings to you, my friend! :-)
Turner Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:35 PM
I know a few dads that have made just such a sacrifice also, Greg. Some of us have been taught, that responsibility takes precedence over dreams. It's called a selfless love. Beautifully written as always.
Barden Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Very kind of you, Daniel, and I so appreciate the comments! I was a single dad, so I can relate a bit. :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Succinct. Nice work my friend, my best to you in the contest! xomo <3
Barden Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Thanks so much, Dear Mo - didn't place.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Giving up their life of freedom to one of sacrifice certainly makes them a special human being. Beautiful verse Gregory. Tom
Barden Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:18 PM
You are so right, Tom, thank you - so pleased you enjoyed it! :-)
One Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Life is a sacrifice Gregory, my mum was a single mum who brought up 4 children... Nice poem..
Barden Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so much, Silent One. I was a single dad, so I can relate a bit.
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Lovely, Gregory. Beautiful poem. The nostalgia shines through.
Barden Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you very much, Line! :-)
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