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Sacrifice

Sacrifice Sacrificial solitudes traumatically trapped thru out time Sabotaged souls subservient to the Necronomicon night A selfless surrender sanctioned with a calamitous climb Penal punitive pondering of the marauding mind's abyss A slave seducing deviation from the mantra morals amiss For infinities infraction the absorption of a stigmatic smite. March.28.2018 Rhyme Time 1 Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 4/28/2018 8:01:00 AM
This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:46:00 PM
Congrats! bbn
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:07:00 AM
Nice work
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, wonderful excellent rhyme and alliteration write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written rhyme and more. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 4/3/2018 12:47:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, WW, with this awesome write.
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Date: 4/3/2018 12:14:00 PM
Congrats, Winged Warrior. Great write. Well deserved win.
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:32:00 AM
many congrats ^WW^ excellent rhyme and alliteration:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:22:00 AM
awesome WW! Great alliteration and wonderful metaphors. Exactly what I love. thank you and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/28/2018 3:15:00 PM
Could have bern enteted to the alliteration contest also...Great lines WW
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Date: 3/28/2018 2:02:00 PM
Excellent depiction..rhyming...alliteration..well done, WW!
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Date: 3/28/2018 1:07:00 PM
Rich rhythmic rhyming. Wondrous, WW.
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