Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Sacrifice

Sacrifice

Sacrificial solitudes traumatically trapped thru out time
Sabotaged souls subservient to the Necronomicon night
A selfless surrender sanctioned with a calamitous climb
Penal punitive pondering of the marauding mind's abyss
A slave seducing deviation from the mantra morals amiss
For infinities infraction the absorption of a stigmatic smite.




March.28.2018
Rhyme Time 1
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Funom Makama April 28, 2018 at 8:01 AM This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...

Barbara Barry-Nishanian April 5, 2018 at 9:46 PM Congrats! bbn

Harshita Chaudhary April 4, 2018 at 9:07 AM Nice work

Eve Roper April 3, 2018 at 8:21 PM Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, wonderful excellent rhyme and alliteration write. Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Gentry April 3, 2018 at 8:05 PM Congratulations on your win with this well-written rhyme and more. I enjoyed this.

Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 12:47 PM Congrats on your well deserved win, WW, with this awesome write.

Randy Steele April 3, 2018 at 12:14 PM Congrats, Winged Warrior. Great write. Well deserved win.

Jan Allison April 3, 2018 at 10:32 AM many congrats ^WW^ excellent rhyme and alliteration:-) hugs jan xx

Beautiful Scars April 3, 2018 at 10:22 AM awesome WW! Great alliteration and wonderful metaphors. Exactly what I love. thank you and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Silent One March 28, 2018 at 3:15 PM Could have bern enteted to the alliteration contest also...Great lines WW

Vijay Pandit March 28, 2018 at 2:02 PM Excellent depiction..rhyming...alliteration..well done, WW!

Line Gauthier March 28, 2018 at 1:07 PM Rich rhythmic rhyming. Wondrous, WW.