Sacred Whispers

   
            Sacred whispers of fortresses forgotten

               heard no more in sandcastles begotten
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 5:43 PM
simple but deeply thought provoking
Elliott Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 9:20 AM
A pretty and thought provoking poem, Gershon. Ever see the amazing photos of sandcastles on the internet? Shalom:)
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 5:21 AM
sand castles...slowly reclaimed by the incoming tides...
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