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"sacred Season"

A dream To hear the whippoorwills' sad urgent call I was very glad when I was a lad But now twilight nearing new season's fall My Essence of truth my consciousness calls My tears being not of my former years For sake of humans I now turn my cares As compassion of true identity From sacred place calls from infinity Within unlimited aspects' of me A great white throne in the distance I see Around sacred bend a familiar friend Silhouette of me as my God I see No more desirous of earth's vain glory The mind's wilderness of exploratory History recedes illusions of me My ego thoughts I just had to be Totality of Love I see as me Enter into God's synchronicity I now see my God as I now see me As sacredness of the reality As Sacredness calls a new season's fall Recesses the former whippoorwills' call As new life calls I now realize it all New life is in the Sacred Season's Fall Mystified as I liquefied I cry As in spirit of love quite high I fly Above consequences life's densities As spiritual tears replace human fears 1-12-10

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Audrey Haick

Date: 4/26/2010 6:18:00 PM

Dear JohnMoses! Congratulations on your win in the contest!! Enjoy your win on this beautiful poem...Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 7:47:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your HM in Matt's contest just posted... a wonderful write and honor for u to enjoy in your poetry portfolio..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/2/2010 5:03:00 PM

the spirit is an overwhelming sense of feel once the human come in contact with their own, or just a force in general. it can change them entirely, or enhance who they are. great narrative. -Always&Forever Lynette

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/8/2010 11:25:00 AM

Moses, As usual, your words have wisdom and present fresh perspectives on God. Agape, Dane Ann

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/11/2010 2:37:00 PM

Good reading. Hope you are having a wonderful day. It's 60 here today and going to get even warmer as the week goes on. Ellen

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 1/26/2010 11:30:00 AM

John this is absolutely beautiful writing. I especially like the last stanza Bravo Love Cookie

Ann Rich

Date: 1/25/2010 1:10:00 PM

You are just as awesome as me John....I love you! Truly I do.... You John are most excellently spoken attracting the lights in me... Great work....

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/19/2010 6:35:00 AM

A Brilliant and beautiful poem with wonderful spiritual feelings. It is so lovely and nice and beautifully penned. love it. Many thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem The Boatman's Song. Hope you would find its coming parts also interesting. With best wished and love Ravindra

Linda Witt-King

Date: 1/18/2010 8:40:00 PM

This is one I will read over and over. Amazingly profound, Moses, with layers of meaning. I'm very grateful that you introduced your work to me by stopping by to comment on mine. I love this. "Totality of Love I see as me" ...that's true Self-realization

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2010 6:09:00 PM

Another wonderful gifted write from u Moses my friend.. u continue to amaze this poet with your words, thoughts, messages, verses, inspirations, talent, gifts... truly a special blessing to the Soup and to me... felt your prayers during this trial which should be over by Friday... enjoyed .. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2010 3:54:00 PM

When we get older we begin to accept that death is part of life and that it will come to us. That metamorphasis that will happen will be out of this world. Thanks for stopping by and reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate the kind comments. Sara

Sue Mason

Date: 1/18/2010 3:14:00 PM

Brings a smile this beautiful writing, John !! Are you familar with the poet, Edgar Guest? Your writing brings him to mind as he too told wonderful stories with a cadence very like yours. Love the last line here !!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/17/2010 2:38:00 PM

nicely penned, thanks for your comments on my works.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 3:36:00 PM

Hmmm, I am nearly in my "fall years" but I haven't gotten to this degree of spirituality yet. A nice and profound poem, dear john!

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2010 10:07:00 AM

This is definitely a testament to your belief in God and his mercy. That with His love and grace,we're able to slay the ego and live in His spirit is a goal we all wish to attain. Awesome write, JohnMoses! Goes to my favs.! Peace and love, audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2010 7:55:00 AM

The "illusions" we have of ourselves can cause us to take the wrong paths sometimes, John. However, seeing yourself in sync with God in His totality of Love will set us straight again until we are flying high once more. I love the spiritual quality to your work, my dear friend. You never cease to amaze me with your insight! Love you, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 1/16/2010 6:44:00 AM

Wow! John, this is a true testament to your beautiful heart/soul. Very spiritual write. Truly enjoyed. Bless your heart. Take care, Love Light Patty

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/16/2010 3:14:00 AM

This is a lovely poem that testifies of your love for and growth in the love of God. Very Nice, Moses. (Recovery is too slow to suit me...but OK.) Love to you. Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/15/2010 10:16:00 PM

Very interesting write and I love the end. Thanks for sharing, Moses. Best wishes, Caroline.

Ronald Bingham

Date: 1/15/2010 8:25:00 PM

Awesome poem, I too am in more or less my twilight years. It seems as we reach this plateau we know that there is more to life than what we have seen. I think this is when we really seek the face of God. Blessings,Ron

Marty Owens

Date: 1/15/2010 8:15:00 PM

This is beautiful...Enjoyed...Marty