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Sacred -

Ring 'round
Heart found,

Mouth flesh,
Kiss fresh,

Pulse sear,
Vow clear,

Hands rite
Held tight,

Body press,
Warm Yes...

Love beam
No seam,

Soul sheen
Truth seen,

Lips felt,
Light melt...


J.A.B.

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Ink Empress

July 15, 2026 at 1:13 PM

Dear Justin, I am surprised and pleased to see you write a footle, and one that feels like a heartfelt vow! The rhymes and wordplay here is so original! Some of the couplets made me think of how clever your mind is! Such as "Love beam No seam" no seam speaks volumes , "Pulse sear, Vow clear," the use of sear there is soul piercingly brilliant! "Soul sheen Truth seen," ah I felt the ring of truth around hand rite warmed with pressed yes for a love so sacred! Deep! Never knew few syllables could deliver such unforgettable depth! Well ofcourse You are no ordinary! Pleasure reading Sending you light, today and always

Justin Bordner

July 15, 2026 at 2:47 PM

Yeah Love beam no seam is quintessential to the strength and vibe of this vow Poetess. So glad that you felt that. Look how clsver you are with your harmonic rearrangement! You are lovely...J.A.B.

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