Sacrafice

I know I have to sacrifice all the things before me
But take my wings, take my  soul
I sacrifice all to thee
MY body is all that's left to offer
And I offer it to you 
I have completed all the tasks 
That I was told to do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Aha i enjoyd dis cute sweet poem in its somewhat pretence of naivety and docility. I hope u read mine newest too.
Delaney Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Wonderful poem welcome to the soup. SuZ
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