Note:Sabi -Early Japanese words that alludes to the solitary contemplative condition in which poetry is written
I contemplate in my lonely mood there to find atmosphere feeling colour &tone fills the mind with imagined scenes fills the empty heart where loneliness ..lives apart when the clock ticks slow restlessness ebbs to then fro
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