James Edward Lee Sr. Poet Haiku

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SABBATH DAY RABBIT EATING Dandelion Greens-

on the Sabbath day
 my yard was unruly un-
cut grass stood before

 me a rabbit sits 
going on his ears and mustache
 he starts chewing eat-

ing dandelion 
leaves also yummy was this 
to him little gray 

white rabbit eating 
the green dandelion leaf
on the Sabbath day

6/2/2024
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

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Benjamin Bartley June 2, 2024 at 7:51 PM I've never seen haiku presented this way. Very unique. And impressive.

Miranda Hawley June 2, 2024 at 6:45 PM Watching nature is one way to spend the Sabbath! Have a great day.