S. O. S.

So many times it seems 
Our dreams are written in the stars;
So many times my skies are cloudy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:44 AM
This is deep, I love the acrostic SOS. DN
Neal Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 1:05 PM
Wow! This is a spectacular piece. Welcome to poetry soup. Sometimes my skies are cloudy. And I can't see. Love Elizabeth.
Lopez Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 7:51 AM
Thanks for your comments on on my poems. It's through our most trying times that we discover who we are. nice... A Lopez
Winter Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 7:30 AM
Hope the skies clear up for you soon. When they do, the stars will seem more brilliant than ever. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 3:22 AM
This is deep Caramel, love the imagination you have. Keep up the good work...Raul
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