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S For Shocking

society’s scars
subversive subtlety---
soulless spirits seek

© Harry J Horsman  2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

November 9, 2011 at 7:09 PM

A pointed view of what's wrong with society. The S's are used well in this! :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 11, 2011 at 1:03 AM

Lots of S's!! Agood social commentary, Harry. YOu are one of my last to see tonight. Look at me here at 2 a.m in the rocky MOuntain zone. I am hopeless!

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2011 at 4:31 PM

Another great one here Harry. An alliterative Senryu..Cool. And the message unfortunately is where it's at.

Joe Maverick

March 3, 2011 at 2:04 PM

true true true, enjoyed today Harry.

Carolyn Devonshire

March 3, 2011 at 11:05 AM

Excellent alliteration and a strong message too, Harry! My soulless spirit has become complacent to our suversive societies antics. This is a wakeup call! So nice to be back home, my friend. Love, Carolyn

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