S a T U R N

S*A*T*U*R*N

Slinging our way through your ice-ball halos,
Around your myriad shepherding moon rocks, 
Tiger-stripe ice cream body below
Undulates in a tidal, hypnotizing rhythm,
Rocking our slender ship.
No sane artist could imagine you.


May 29, 2021

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Date: 11/21/2021 1:30:00 PM
excellent ink, love the description, many congrats on your win Phil:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2021 9:01:00 AM
Very creative - especially the final line which perfectly catches the imaginative twist of your fine Acrostic. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 11/20/2021 11:14:00 PM
A great acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2021 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on a 9th place finish on my Planets poem from ages ago. Incredible taut write, fabulous word choice. First line really grabbed me.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/31/2022 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Matt, I had forgotten about this contest.
Date: 6/29/2021 7:15:00 PM
An original description of a beautiful planet. Thanks for posting it. / Maurice
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Date: 5/30/2021 7:36:00 AM
Excellent Phil. Really great imagery and good description. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/31/2021 4:02:00 AM
Thanks Judy for the love. :)
Date: 5/30/2021 6:43:00 AM
I dig this. Very unique topic and week written
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