Phil Capitano Poet Acrostic

S a T U R N

S*A*T*U*R*N

Slinging our way through your ice-ball halos,
Around your myriad shepherding moon rocks, 
Tiger-stripe ice cream body below
Undulates in a tidal, hypnotizing rhythm,
Rocking our slender ship.
No sane artist could imagine you.


May 29, 2021

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Jan Allison November 21, 2021 at 1:30 PM excellent ink, love the description, many congrats on your win Phil:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne November 21, 2021 at 9:01 AM Very creative - especially the final line which perfectly catches the imaginative twist of your fine Acrostic. Congratulations! Brian

Christuraj Alex November 20, 2021 at 11:14 PM A great acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!

Matt Caliri November 20, 2021 at 8:57 PM Congrats on a 9th place finish on my Planets poem from ages ago. Incredible taut write, fabulous word choice. First line really grabbed me. Phil Capitano March 31, 2022 at 5:42 AM Thanks Matt, I had forgotten about this contest.

Maurice Rigoler June 29, 2021 at 7:15 PM An original description of a beautiful planet. Thanks for posting it. / Maurice

Judy Ball May 30, 2021 at 7:36 AM Excellent Phil. Really great imagery and good description. Love it. God Bless, JB Phil Capitano May 31, 2021 at 4:02 AM Thanks Judy for the love. :)

Peter Baldwin May 30, 2021 at 6:43 AM I dig this. Very unique topic and week written