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Rythm of the Falls

Cascading water Natures untamed melody Soothing to the soul

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2009 10:48:00 AM

Love this one. I can see, feel, and hear this fall. Keep writing. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/14/2009 8:24:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Erica! Good luck in the contest! Peace, audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2009 4:41:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Erica. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/13/2009 12:35:00 PM

Sounds like soft music! Nicely done! ~ Carrie

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 10/13/2009 9:59:00 AM

I can hear it, Erica. :)

Marty Owens

Date: 10/13/2009 9:14:00 AM

This is very nice...I like the "untamed melody" Good luck in the contest...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/13/2009 8:43:00 AM

What a lovely image, complete with its own unique soundtrack. Very nice, Erica! Love, Carolyn