Rythm of the Falls

Cascading water
Natures untamed melody
Soothing to the soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Love this one. I can see, feel, and hear this fall. Keep writing. Sara
Haick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Excellent Haiku Erica! Good luck in the contest! Peace, audrey
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Beautiful Haiku Erica. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Sounds like soft music! Nicely done! ~ Carrie
Mchugh Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 9:59 AM
I can hear it, Erica. :)
Owens Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 9:14 AM
This is very nice...I like the "untamed melody" Good luck in the contest...Marty
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October 13, 2009 at 8:43 AM
What a lovely image, complete with its own unique soundtrack. Very nice, Erica! Love, Carolyn
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